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I celebrated my birthday on 01.12.2014. I invited my best girlfriend’s class’s yujiao Oceane and Carla. Saturday the fifteenth January 2014. We went to the bowling of Dorlisheim . We played two parties bowling. Yujiao won the first parties about sixty records and the second parties Carla won about 100 records. Yujiao is a really champion of bowling. My friends and I are very athletic and our favorite sport is bowling. We had a great bowling game that's why it was a great day
After this, we returned back home. My mother and my twin sister had prepared cakes, cookies and brownies because we are also greedy. We drank and ate candies and Champomy.
My friends gave me many presents, DVD perfume and books by Agatha Christy. That’s my favorite books. I was very happy on my birthday day.
In the late afternoon we played Wii Party. On this CD is a lot of games like canoeing boxing etc. ..... We really enjoyed.