Je pourrais ajouter quoi a cette description : My name is ( *** ) , I’m 13 years old and I live in (***) . I was born the 19 december 1997 in France . I study in the middle school (***) . I speak French , English and Spanish . I’m short , I have brown eyes and black hair . I’m quiet and patient . I live with my parents , they are fifty years old , I have a sister and a brother they are twenty five years old but they are in France for their studies . My favourite colour is the red because I find this is an alive colour . My favourite sports is the tennis , I like rackets-sports . I’m crazy about computing and video games , this is my passion . I play that since I’m four years old with my brother . Now I collect my games of before . When my brother used to live Guadeloupe for go in France , I talk with him by the mobile only because I was little to use internet , now we play together online with the computer . He wants to come a doctor and my sister wants to come an English teacher . Me , I would like to be a dentist because I like the medical but I hate Blood .

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ton prénom, ta date de naissance...
tu pourrais dire le métier de tes parents avant .What's your favourite kind of music?dire ce que tu n'aimes pas .. on dit "my favourite sport is tennis" et he wants to become a doctor and my wants to become an English teacher"

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  • Utilisateur Brainly
2014-01-09T21:20:06+01:00
Je pense que c'est bon

Tu peux rajouter le métier de tes parents.
2014-01-09T21:38:09+01:00
Je pense que ce serais mieux en changeant quelques petites choses de place ( j'ai aussi effectué quelques corrections ) : My name is ( *** ) and I’m 13 years old. I was born the 19 december 1997 in France . I'm studying at (***) middle school in ( ta ville/ton village ) where I live with my parents who're fifty. I also have a twenty five years sister and brother who are in France for their studies .. ( vivent-ils avec vous en France ou est-ce qu'il sont dans un autre pays ? ) .  I’m short, with brown eyes and black hair, I’m quiet and patient and I can speak French , English and Spanish. My favourite colour is the red because I think it's a lively color. I love tennis like all other rackets-sports. I’m crazy about computing and video games , I'm really into that ! I strated playing them with my brother when I was four years old. Now I'm collecting my old games. When my brother was living in Guadeloupe, I used to talk to him on phone only because I was still too young to use the internet. Now we play online computer games together. He wants to become a doctor and my sister wants to become an English teacher. For me, I would like to be a dentist because I like medicine but I hate seeing blood.