J ai créé un poéme et j aimerez savoir si il y a des fautes et si il est bien merci d avance
Why were you gone?
Is that what you were afraid ?
I wasn't With another
I loves secretly
But you thought
You was just my best friend
But m'y friends chip
Is changing in love
I do not care to say that the orther
My heart beats for you
And you Know
Baby i love you



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mise à par les quelques fautes corrigé tout est juste ! :-)
tiens je te l'ai corrige Why were you gone?
Is that what you were afraid ?
I wasn't With another
I love secretly
But you thought
You were just my best friend
But my friends chip
Is changing in love
I do not care to say that the other
My heart beats for you
And you Know
Baby I love you

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2013-11-30T20:25:35+01:00
A la 7 eme ligne je tai corrigé
Why were you gone?
Is that what you were afraid ?
I wasn't With another
I loves secretly
But you thought
You was just my best friend4
But my friends chip
Is changing in love
I do not care to say that the orther
My heart beats for you
And you Know
Baby i love you


il est bien alor ?
oui trés bien
et i dont know a la 9 eme lignes
merci
derien
Meilleure réponse !
2013-11-30T20:28:55+01:00
Why were you gone?
Were you afraid ?
I wasn't with another
I loved secretly.
But you thought
You was just my best friend
But my feeling for you
Changes into love
I don't care to say
That my heart beats for you
And you Know 
Baby i love you