Hello

Je ne suis pas sûre de ses phrases et j'aimerais une correction sérieuse et des idées de rajout sont les bienvenus en commentaires merci :

Giovanni Da Verrazzano was an Italian explorer from Tuscany. He was born in 1485 and he was died in 1528. He discovered the bay of NY and called it New Angouleme ( j'aimerais dire pourquoi il l'a nommé new angouleme ). He was killed by cannibals and he was eate. After him, today in NYC, was name the Verrazano Bridge.

Henry is his surname and his first name is Hudson. He is an English. He was born in 1565 and died in 1611. ( Et j'ai une information mais je ne sais pas comment le dire en anglais en forme de phrase correcte : while he was sailing in the North Atlantic, in a mutiny( he was put on a boat by his sailors )

Et Finalement des phrases correcte formulant cette biographie en anglais :

First name : Solomon

Dates : 1861/1946

Place of birth : Philadelphia, USA place of death : NYC

occupation : businessman and art collector

source of fortune : mining

how he used his money : helped modern art and founded the Guggenheim Foundation for Modern Art

Les deux premières biographies sont prioritaires donc merci à ceux qui m'aideront <3

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2013-11-28T20:45:49+01:00
Pour la correction: Giovanni Da Verrazzano was an Italian explorer from Tuscany. He was born in 1485 and died in 1528. He discovered the bay of NY and called it New Angouleme. 

He was killed by cannibals and they ate him. After this, gouvernment in NYC, named it the Verrazano Bridge.   Henry is his nickname and his first name is Hudson. He is English. He was born in 1565 and died in 1611.  While he was sailing in the North Atlantic, in a mutiny, his sailors putted him in a boat.  


He discovered the bay of NY and called it New Angouleme because Giovanni was send to Fance by the King of France, who gave him the mission. So, he wanted to honnour François the first, the count of Angouleme.
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ok merciii :) bocoup <3
He discovered the bay of NY and called it New Angouleme in honnor of Francois the first, who had been count of Angouleme. In fact, Giovanni was sent to France by the King of France, who gave him the mission to explore India.
Merciiii aurait des infos suppl sur Solomon Guggenheim ou Henry Hudson ?
2013-11-28T22:41:13+01:00
Heny Hudson was an English see explorer and Navigator. He was born in 1565 and died in 1611.