Correction d'un devoir :

Bonjour, pouvez-vous me corriger les fautes(grammaire, conjugaison, syntaxe, tournure de phrases...) de mon devoir ?
Many inventors have createdseveral inventions to make our lives easier ,The British and American paperinventors is that names do have different inventors andtheir invention.
For example , he named Willis Carrier
who invented air conditioning or Alexander Graham Bell
who invented the telephone . These inventions have helped
facilitate our daily work and make our lives less difficult .
Indeed telephone invented by Alexander Bell has Grahal
facilitate communication between different people.

But science rivals SF in our lives as we can see in the doc " the time
machine " which is an extract from the novel by HG well . in this
extract , a man, the time traveler speak of the creation of
the machine back in time. These technologies as the SF
time machine allow people to free themselves from their
problems by imagining how the future will be . The time machine
example can imagine the population in the next
years, it will really be possible to travel in time.
To conclude we can say that
compete to transform our lives for science to create
new technologies to make our lives simpler but
Science fiction can let go of our imagination to
imagine how would our future. Advances in
technologies have allowed people to live safer but
especially live more comfortable and modern and therefore
make them happier

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2013-11-18T18:25:47+01:00
Many inventors have created several inventions in order to make our lives easier. The British and American paper inventors gave  their names so there are  different  inventors. For example ,  Willis Carrier who invented air conditioning or Alexander Graham Bell who invented the telephone . These inventions have helped to facilitate our daily work and make our lives less difficult. Indeed , the telephone invented by Alexander Bell has indeed facilitated communication between different people. But science rivals SF  in our lives as we can see  in the doc " the timemachine "  which  is  an extract from the novel  by Horson Wells .   In this extract , a man, the time traveler,  speaks  of the creation of the machine back in time. The technology of the time machine allow people to free themselves from their problems by imagining how the future will be . The time machine example can illustrate the benefit in the next years to the population who will be really able to travel in time. To conclude we may say that creating new technologies makes our life simplier and that science fictione can lead us to imagine our futures lifes.  Advanced technologies allow people to live safer and specially more confortable. Therefore, they make them happier.
Voilà, j'ai fait du mieux que je pouvais en respectant l'esprit de ton texte original. A toi de voir...
Merci beaucoup d'avoir pris le temps de me répondre ! :)
j'ai noté une faute au moins : The technology of the time machine allows tec
Ah d'accord merci ! ^^