Bonjour, pouvez vous corriger mes phrases d'anglais svp:
-Hello, fine and you? then, have you think about your trip?( bonjour, bien et toi? alors, as tu pensé à ton voyage ?)
- Really ? you can't be serious ( vraiment ? tu n'es pas sérieuse ?)
- I see...but I totally disagree with you...( je vois...mais je ne suis pas d'accord avec toi)
- I do believe that this is a bas idea. It's so dangerous to do it alone. You are unconscious and if it arrives you something ? you don't know anyone there. ( je pense que c'est une mauvaise idée, c'est tres dangereux de le faire seul, tu es inconsciente et si il t'arrive quelque chose? tu ne connais personne là bas)
- No, it's too big, it will take you to the years to do! ( non c'est bien trop grand, cela va te prendre des années )

Merci beaucoup

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2013-11-17T15:57:50+01:00
-Hello, fine and you? So, what are you thinking about your trip?
- Really ? you can't be serious
-I see... but I don't agree with you...
-I think it's a bad idea, it's very dangerous to do it alone. You're 
unconscious and if something happened to you?you know anybody there.
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 No, it's too big, it will take you many years to do it.
2013-11-17T16:40:56+01:00
I do believe that this is a bas idea.
Ce n'est pas "bas idea" mais "bad idea"
(...) This is a bad idea (...)