Salut tout le monde ! Voici ce que j'ai écrit pour mon devoir d'anglais ( "créer un texte racontant une excursion dans la nature, a la maniere du texte
étudié en classe") et je voudrais savoir si cela ne vous dérengeriez pas de corriger les erreurs ?!
Merci !! :)
29 November 2013
It was a rainy day, not amazing for November ! But my desire to go for a walk in woods had no change for that. My mother said that it was too much cold, but for me, it was the ideal temperature.
I put my yellow anorak, and my favorite rainy boots and I left accompanied only with a backpack containing my favorite chocolate bars !
On the road, I saw some squirrels, birds and lizards but nothing very fascinating …
When I entered in the forest, I heard a flash of lightning. A drizzle fall on my shoulders.
I continued to walked when I saw the leaves of bushes to move. Just later , a sound of heavy footsteps was listened. Maybe it was the storm ?
Steps moved closer more and more until I found me in front of a wild boar. I did not know what to do. Panicked, I left my bag. I run away. After some meters of running, I saw that this animal had torn my bag and it was eating my chocolate bars.
I will never come back in woods with food …