Beaucoups de points a gagner!

Hello mes kikis! Voilà mon probleme. Je viens de cfaire un exposé et j'aimerais que vous corrigiez la moindre faute. : Nowadays,teenagers have got a heavy schoolbag! Many people suffer from probleme at the back. In the mornig, students are tired of carrying heavy bags. Often, they must be operated in the hospital because of their schoolbag all this is very espensive! But we can change this.

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-Doctor,i have big probleme of back.
-i understand. So,they are very teenagers that as you. It would reduce the number of notebooks. (je sais pas comment on dit rendre leger) rendre leger and kept lighter the books in the classeroom.
-Ok, docteur!
-If you need help, comein my office!
-Thank's doctor!>>

Il me faut aussi un slogans las dessus, donc si vous arrivez a m'en trouver 1 :P

Merci beaucoups! c;

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-Doctor I have big back problems !
- I understand, lots of teenagers are in your situation. You need to make your bag lighter, leave some books in the classroom.
- Ok doctor !
- If you need help come to my office !
- Thank you.

voila tout est corrigé :)
MERCII BEAUUCOUPPPS! c:
Ta pas utilisé google tradction rassure moi ? x)
non je l'ai fait a l'instant avec ma mere :)
Oh!!! Merci beaucoups et di merci a ta mere! c:

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2013-10-06T21:14:19+02:00
Nowadays,teenagers have got a heavy schoolbag! Many people suffer from problemes at the back. In the morning, students are tired of carrying heavy bags. Often, they must be operated in the hospital because of their schoolbag all this is very espensive! But we can change this. 
<<-Doctor,i have big problemes of back.- I understand. So, they are very teenagers that as you. It would reduce the number of notebooks make slight and kept lighter the books in the classeroom.-Ok, docteur!-If you need help, come in my office!-Thank's doctor, goodbye!>>

J'ai corrigé qlq fautes, mais sinon bien.
Tu m'a corrigé aucune faute... Appart me dire comment on dit rendre leger '-'
Si, relis toi --.
Meilleure réponse !
2013-10-06T21:39:02+02:00
Nowadays, teenagers have a heavy schoolbag! Many people suffer from back problems. Every morning, people are tired of carrying heavy bags. They often need to be operated on because of their schoolbag. All this is very expensive! But we can change this.