BONSOIR , quelqun pourrai me corriger mes 2 textes svp c'est pour mon bac danglais à loral please please

The notion i'm going to deal with is “The idea of progress” .

First, you must define the idea of progress.

Progress is the action to go forward, to grow, to be better and the idea is a representation of something in the mind.

So the idea of progress means the representation of a possible evolution.

Problématique : we may ask ourselves about new tecnologies : advantages or disadvantages ?

First Prev In time I will say that the new tecnologies are benefits for men and for society but also disadvantages for men and the planet.

To start I will say that the new technologies are an advantage because can facilitate the daily lives of consumers, eg the washing machine or car.
At the medical level, they can treat more diseases and save many more lives.
We can speak with a person who is at the other end of the world, facebook or msn.
In case of problem, we can contact the family the police or ambulance thanks to the phone.
For companies, progress is saving time therefore money.
Exchanges are very fast especially with the internet or through electronic mail dun.
I will also add that companies have a facil document management and a better ability to store information.
You can also send CV via the Internet to look for work.

However, new technologies are also disadvantages, indeed new technologies cause polutions in several cities, with cars and factories.
So gradually they are destroying the planet.
I would also add that many people are addicted to new technologies, and more come home, they are isolated with their new technologies
they spend more time with the new technologies with their families or friends in reality .

To conclude I would say that the new technologies are important in our daily lives, parcequ'elles our lives easier, such as car or bus to work or go to school.
But they pollute the planet more and more people are addicted and isolated from them

For many temp the woman had a picture from that stay at home, soccuper children and her husband, the household chores and to cook.
Men consider women inferior to them
women do not have their place in the world of work and the political level.
I would also add that women do not have the right to vote.
The men were so power against women.

Economically, women continuents to be poorer than men.
THEY are used to have a infériur wage, the wage gap between women and men is 22%
women often hold temporary jobs, as it often falls pregnant, employers do not hire them often.
They are given less guidance and less spots represent positions in the rear.

At the political level, women are not present, in fact, in many countries it is the men who govern.

But when women have even managed to integrate themselves into the world of work, they fight for equality between men and women, for example, clara campoamor a woman who fight for the right to vote for women.
They study more in school, in college ....
but nevertheless there is still inequality between women and men, as ceteians men still think that women are inferior to them.

in conclusion I would say that to have equality between men and women, It would be necessary to change the mentalities

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  • gem
  • Ambitieux
2013-05-21T16:17:31+02:00

 

The notion i'm going to deal with is “The idea of progress” .

First, you must define the idea of progress.

Progress is the action to go forward, to grow, to be better and the idea is a representation of something in the mind.

So the idea of progress means the representation of a possible evolution.

Problématique : we may ask ourselves about new tecnologies : advantages or disadvantages ?

First Prev?? In time I will say that the new technologies are beneficial for man and for society but can also be a disadvantage for man and the planet.
To start I will say that the new technologies are an advantage because they can facilitate the daily lives of consumers, eg the washing machine or car. At the medical level, they can treat more diseases and save many more lives. We can speak with a person who is at the other end of the world, facebook or msn. In case of a problem, we can contact the family the police or ambulance thanks to the phone. For companies, progress is saving time therefore money. Exchanges are very fast especially with the internet or through electronic mail dun???. I will also add that companies can have an easy document management and a better ability to store information. You can also send a CV via the Internet to look for work.
However, new technologies also have disadvantages, indeed new technologies cause polution in several cities, with cars and factories. So gradually they are destroying the planet. I would also add that many people are addicted to new technologies, and more come home, they are isolated with their new technologies in reality  they spend more time with the new technologies than with their families or friends.
To conclude I would say that the new technologies are important in our daily lives, because they make our lives easier, such as car or bus to work or go to school. But they pollute the planet more and more people are addicted and isolated from them

 

 

For a long time women have been pictured staying  at home, looking after the children and her husband, the household chores and to cook. Men consider women inferior to them women do not have their place in the world of work and the political level. I would also add that women do not have the right to vote. The men were so power against women.
Economically, women continue to be poorer than men. THEY are used to having an inferior wage, the wage gap between women and men is 22% women often hold temporary jobs, as they often fall pregnant, employers do not hire them often. They are given less guidance and less spots represent positions in the rear???????.
At the political level, women are not present, in fact, in many countries it is the men who govern.

But when women have managed to integrate themselves into the world of work, they fight for equality between men and women, for example, Clara Campoamor a woman who  fought for the right to vote for women. They study more in school, in college .... but nevertheless there is still inequality between women and men, as certain men still think that women are inferior to them.
in conclusion I would say that to have equality between men and women, It would be necessary to change their mentality