Alors déjà Bonjour a tous. J'ai un problème. Pour vendredi prochain, j'ai une rédaction en anglais de 150mots, n'étant pas très forte en anglais ( et ma famille non plus) esque vous pourriez me corrigée mes erreure dans mon texte ? Please. Nous devons raconté nos grande Vacances.

During my summer holiday. I went to Spain with my sister for 2 months ago. I was at my grandmother to see my grandfather who was sick. My sister and me visited our cousins has. We were at the beach with our friends. It was funny! We laughed a lot. We had shops. It was wery hot so we often had the pool.Every nigth, we stayed cutside with our cousins and our friends. On 19 Augusr we left to go PORT AVENTURA with my sister,my brother,my sister in law and my nephews. We were in a great hotel. There was a pool. There was a lot riding, we were all doing. It was really very funny! We stayed only 5 days, it is so bad ! The last day was had the beach. We play with our nephews in the sand. We found shell , so beautiful! I was impatient to see my friends again and also to go back to school. The were unforgettable holidays!

Merci d'avance au personnes qui m'aideront!

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2012-09-16T14:48:02+02:00

In my summer's holiday i went to spain with my sisters for 2 months. I went to my grandparents's house to visit my grandfather who was sick. Then we visited my cousins to. We went to the beach with our friends. It was funny. We had alot of fun! We shopped! The weather was so hot so we often go to the swimming pool. We spent every night outside with our friends! On 19 august me, my sister, my brother and my sister inlaw, we left to go to port aventura. We wtayed in a great hotel and there was a swimmingpool! It was really funny we enjoyed it! We just stayed 5 days! i would to stay there more time ! 

We spent our last day to the beach! We played all together in the sans it was so amazing! We found alot of shells, so beautyfull ! 

I was so patient to go to school to see my friends again!

I passed an unforgettable time this summer i relly loved it!

 

 

 

J'ai fait des modifications aux phrases qui n'avaient vraiment pas de sens j'ai tout corriger j'espere t'avoir aider ;) et boonne continuation pour ton anglais :p

2012-09-16T17:12:19+02:00

During my summer holidays. I went to Spain with my sister for 2 months. I went to my grandmother's to see my grandfather who was sick. My sister and me visited our cousins . We were at the beach with our friends. It was funny! We laughed a lot. We do some shopping. It was wery hot so we often went to the pool.Every nigth, we stayed outside with our cousins and our friends. On August 19 th we left to go to PORT AVENTURA with my sister,my brother,my sister in law and my nephews. We were in a great hotel. There was a pool. There was a lot riding, we were all doing. It was really very funny! We stayed only 5 days, it is so bad ! The last day we went to the beach. We play with our nephews in the sand. We found shells , so beautiful! I was impatient to see my friends again and also to go back to school. They were unforgettable holidays!