Alors déjà Bonjour a tous. J'ai un problème. Pour vendredi prochain, j'ai une rédaction en anglais de 150mots, n'étant pas très forte en anglais ( et ma famille non plus) esque vous pourriez me corrigée mes erreure dans mon texte ? Please. Nous devons raconté nos grande Vacances.
During my summer holiday. I went to Spain with my sister for 2 months ago. I was at my grandmother to see my grandfather who was sick. My sister and me visited our cousins has. We were at the beach with our friends. It was funny! We laughed a lot. We had shops. It was wery hot so we often had the pool.Every nigth, we stayed cutside with our cousins and our friends. On 19 Augusr we left to go PORT AVENTURA with my sister,my brother,my sister in law and my nephews. We were in a great hotel. There was a pool. There was a lot riding, we were all doing. It was really very funny! We stayed only 5 days, it is so bad ! The last day was had the beach. We play with our nephews in the sand. We found shell , so beautiful! I was impatient to see my friends again and also to go back to school. The were unforgettable holidays!
Merci d'avance au personnes qui m'aideront!